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    * MythicalHosting! ALMOST READY REVIEW FIRST PLEASE

    www.mythicalhosting.com

    Please review and give me your opinions!

    THANKS

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    The text on the header should be re-done. It doesn't look too professional, and the two fonts don't really go well together.

    "Our Servers Include" should be changed to "Our Services Include." - That would make a bit more sense.

    Registering with MythicalHosting could be the best decision your business has ever made.
    I think that phrase should be changed to "Registering with MythicalHosting could be the best decision your business will ever make."

    choosing us will result in the best hosting experiance in your life
    Experiance should be experience.

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    I agree with the above. You need new header text and/or a logo to help identify yourself. You should also run a spell checker over the site. Centering your design or adding some cellpadding would also be good. The left side is almost cut off in Mozilla. I'd also skip a place for "testimonials" until you have them...

    You're off in the right direction.

    Good luck.

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    ok ill try to fix it up

    give me an hour or so
    "Let go, Let God"
    "He didn't lose his life on the cross, He gave it"
    "No matter which path you choose, you can only move forward"

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    Ok, i changed some of the things you guys said too

    please check it out again
    "Let go, Let God"
    "He didn't lose his life on the cross, He gave it"
    "No matter which path you choose, you can only move forward"

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    yes centering it wud be nice.colors 'n stuff are nice.
    good job.
    (is that Shared Web-Hosting image taken from a template ? cus i have the same 1 from a template)
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    ya actually this whole thing is kinda a template

    im too dumb to do this on my own
    "Let go, Let God"
    "He didn't lose his life on the cross, He gave it"
    "No matter which path you choose, you can only move forward"

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    i gotcha huh?
    those little stuff r that template's 2
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    well kinda got me, but i never said "I MADE THIS ALL ON MY OWN" so i never lied

    lol but is it good
    "Let go, Let God"
    "He didn't lose his life on the cross, He gave it"
    "No matter which path you choose, you can only move forward"

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    anyone?
    "Let go, Let God"
    "He didn't lose his life on the cross, He gave it"
    "No matter which path you choose, you can only move forward"

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    Originally posted by insaneraptor
    well kinda got me, but i never said "I MADE THIS ALL ON MY OWN" so i never lied

    lol but is it good
    oops i didnt mean to say somethin like that sorry
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    LOL, i know

    its all good i just need opinions!
    "Let go, Let God"
    "He didn't lose his life on the cross, He gave it"
    "No matter which path you choose, you can only move forward"

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    Nice. The body text is somewhat small though, makes it a little hard to read. I suggest more paragraphs OR larger font. Then again that's just my opinion
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    if you are looking at this template AFTER SUNDAY DEC.8th
    then it has changed. I just purchased a new template from www.***************.com
    so im setting it up right now
    Last edited by insaneraptor; 12-09-2002 at 02:50 PM.
    "Let go, Let God"
    "He didn't lose his life on the cross, He gave it"
    "No matter which path you choose, you can only move forward"

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    Great logo design need to use the right colors.

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