The template looks alright, but it seems to be lacking something in the actual presentation of style and colour. Note also that the two logos don't properly match up, and you've got an empty box above the packages description.
Also, there's a "buy now" button next to the logo - that's not really in the right place, is it? Should be by the packages.
The order form has some issues - freemail accounts rarely accepted?? I always use a Hotmail account precisely because it has virus screening - plus generally hassle free. There's no way I'm hooking up Outlook Express to anything on the web.
Also, the domain registering process looks a little confused - not the most intuitive instructions.