I feel like the bearer of bad news with all of these bad critiques im giving. Its just the truth. I dont think its very good at all. In my opinion it looks like a newbie made it and that is probably because i newbie did make it. All of these small hosting start ups suck people are inexperienced have no idea what they are doing and are just trying to make quick money. None of them will really succeed in the end.
I agree. If you need design inspiration, go to a web site like coolhomepages.com. But DO NOT take screen shots and start plastering other peoples' designs with your own text -- I've seen that done before and it sucks quite badly.
So visit sites like these and see how the good looking web sites look -- then measure yours up to it.