Like flitcher said, it's a little cluttered. I think you have too much headline text. Most of the text on the design is large type, too large in some cases. Like the "Take Control ... " area, there are too many different sizes of fonts, colors, etc. There really isn't anything for your eye to catch that is important, everything is large and screaming for attention. I think if you made certain parts larger as headers with normal sized text below, it would not be as chaotic.