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  1. #1
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    Apr 2002
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    Website just went public (please critic) :o) webhostinghawaii.com

    I just want to know if you can critic my website for me real quick.

    http://www.webhostinghawaii.com

    Everything works, if it doesnt, please email or PM me.
    Positive and NEGATIVE feedback is VERY much welcomed.

    Thanks,
    Ivan
    Owner
    Webhosting Hawaii Inc.
    http://www.webhostinghawaii.com
    Last edited by kailuaboy; 09-21-2002 at 06:27 AM.

  2. #2
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    Brooklyn, NY
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    Nice site-- but you need a more prominent logo. I barely noticed it.

  3. #3
    Looks OK. However, I was hopping I would see some bright and vivid colors since its Hawaii.
    Domain Software, LLC.

  4. #4
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    Jul 2001
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    Troy, Missouri USA
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    flitcher is right I was hoping for palm trees and a Paradise type theme with bright colors. And as mina_babe said you gotta get a good logo. The php logo needs cleaned up a little too.

    I did not see any TOS on the site, but I might of missed it. It is best to include at least one alternative form of contact like ICQ , AIM or an emergency email.

  5. #5
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    nah, hawaii isn't about bright colors. There was the cool surfer on the top, that was simple and neat.

    The whole site is rather simple, what stuck out in my eye and would be my only suggestion would be to clear out some of the small banners on the left, maybe tone them down so they aren't too loud.

    Sitekeepers suggestion about TOS is a good one too, I didn't even notice it missing.

    nice site though!
    -WC-

  6. #6
    Join Date
    Apr 2002
    Location
    Hawaii
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    there is one

    TOS is located in the Order part....
    before they order, they have to comply with TOS, etc.

    Thanks for all feedback,
    Ivan
    Thank you,
    Ivan
    Webhosting Hawaii Inc.
    http://www.webhostinghawaii.com

  7. #7
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    Aug 2002
    Location
    NY
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    Nice design, your advertising apache 3 times and PHP 2 times.. I'd go with one of each..

  8. #8
    Join Date
    Apr 2002
    Location
    Hawaii
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    yeah.... your right... ) one of each... gottcha )

    Thanks,
    ivan
    Thank you,
    Ivan
    Webhosting Hawaii Inc.
    http://www.webhostinghawaii.com

  9. #9
    Join Date
    Mar 2002
    Posts
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    Howzit Hawaiian,

    Having a different header with a little larger title and without the animated gif would give the site a more professional appearance. The surfer logo is good if your target audience is worldwide, but if your main target is in Hawai'i maybe something a little more popular to locals, such as a honu design.

    Your menu area seemed a little squished, and not real noticeable. It might look better if you open it up a little.

    Good luck with your site/business! Malama pono!

  10. #10
    Join Date
    Jun 2002
    Location
    long beach
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    The surfer banner is so cool it made me smile.

    If I had to give advise

    I would say to blend in the buttons and you business logo backgrounds to the background they are in front of. I would then put them in a photo editor to make them a little transparent.

    They seem to grab my attention more then what plans you offer or your company name and modo. Those are the factors I would try to emphasize on.

    Did you make the surfer banner your self? just curious it's nice

    Charles

    I wish I was in Hawaii

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