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    Is this OK?

    Ok im just starting out with web design, and i am writting a profile about me, my skills, work i have done etc etc.

    Anyway, i have started a design, and i want to know what you guys think.

    Basically Home, Skills, Works, Email and About will be clickable, and will turn orange once clicked

    anyway, there is no content there at the moment, just want comments on the design

    its basic, but at the same time i want it to put the point through easily

    anyway, thanx,

    Matt.

    here is the profile
    Last edited by matt2kjones; 09-07-2002 at 01:38 PM.

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    Matt, it is a good start but not a great one. There is no content so it is hard for us to give you feed back.

    Fill out the site more and then ask.
    If you need to ask graphics questions a good place to go is: www.tutorialforum.com

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    There's really nothing there and the colors arent the best.

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    Black color scheme for a profile? Looks bad. This reminds me a porn site.

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    Originally posted by floppy
    Black color scheme for a profile? Looks bad. This reminds me a porn site.
    Look at a lot of porn do ya? Well, I DO! and it looks nothing like a porn site.

    he just needs to flesh it out so we can see his concept.

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    like what tranz have said, "it is a good start but not a great one.". i would like to see a little more before i make any major comments on the design itself.

    here are some stuff i want to suggest to you to kind of push you in the right direction and to think creatively...
    - you have a great name! "the digital dream design". i suggest you remove the word "the". since the name is a great one, why don't you play off that name and design it accordingly. at this point, it doesn't look digital, nor a dream. to even take it a bit further, it really doesn't look to much of a design site. i can see it passing as a personal site but then the name shouldn't be as so. maybe try just using your name instead. nothing wrong with that.
    - the colors are great as well. those are the same colors i used to use when i design. something to keep in mind... those colors are a love it or hate it. a risk to use if you ask me. some people tend to think of those colors as being negative. they will also associate it with halloween. i know... some people won't think so, so that is why it is a risk. colors play an important role in or society, so beware.
    - the good thing about the site is that you designed it to be easily maintainable, clean, and simple. but, almost too simple. i want to see more. something that grabs my attention and makes me pause when i look at it. along the lines of maybe a header or a catchy logo. i can't say for everyone... when i first went on your site, i wanted to click out. nothing really says "come stay at my site and look at what i have to offer!".

    those are the comments i have at the moment. i have to reserve my other comments until you have more to show. as it goes... it is difficult review something that is not complete.

    i'm sure you are up to the task at trying to figure out a creative way to express yourself. good luck.

    take care.

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    There are no contents on the site. The link 'digital dream design' out of the frame when I click to other links. It will be better if you put some contents on the site. However, it looks like you have good designing skills.

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