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    Kerplunc Machine

    Just finished this uber-simply (I think it's too simple, but I've been told to stop trying to complicate it) design: http://machine.kerplunc.com/

    Ignore content, it's mostly blurb or non-drafted stuff.

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    I like it really really nice Well done!!

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    Thanks

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    I like the concept for sure, however I think it is too, bland? Simple is great, however it is lacking color and content.

    Maybe instead of the text at the top: The Machine is a web hosting" you could put an image that would relate to your service, and then you can insert a slogan or message etc in there.

    It needs definition, maybe a clearer footer would be useful?

    It is clean, but it needs something to give it a personality.

    Anyways, those are just my opinions, don't take them too seriously.

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    I really like the minimalism. Maybe a logo or banner of some sort would polish it up.

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    Thanks guys, I'll see what I can do to spice it up, a logo sounds good, something simple but not completely boring. I tried to steer well away from the image headers etc with lovely customer service people smiling, because they are ALL the same.
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    Perhaps a few photos.

    Or a neat logo.

    Just something visual to catch the eye and brighten up the site a little...


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    I love its simplicitity, but it could use some more color. Perhaps put a lightyellow background behind that introtext, with an added darker yellow border?

    I like the idea, it just needs a bit more detail to make it stand out.
    hi there!

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