This is one of my first sites after playing around for a while. Any good? No places to go yet, if you guys think I'm going in the right track, I'll break it down into SSI and finish it up as soon as my......gasp........cyberwings comes back on. If it ever does. Gulp.
I'm sure theres plenty more I could do with it. Your experianced comments are welcome. I want constructive critizism. I can take it!
Thanks a bunch!
Only the add at the top is added by the free host. Cyberwings, if they come out of the water, will not have that. The add below it, however, is mine. Just in case I want one. Heh.
Last edited by dusthazard; 07-15-2002 at 08:45 PM.
1.) get rid of your own ad. Not like you'll be making money from it anyway
2.) for a "n00b", it's pretty good.
3.) go for a style... have some sort of "plan" for your website. Newbie sites tend to throw in a bunch of stuff because it looks good individually, but when you add it together, it just looks tacky.
And I put the newsscript on top of the greyish hazard logo? Did I need "Latest News?" And, I took out the slider at the top since........i ALREADY have news their for viewing once the script is in place......c'mon, cyberwings! ERg.
So, what you think of that? The total format size whet down tremendously with the removal of all that other stuff.
Oh, and once again, ignore that free service prohosting banner, that won't be in the final hosted version.
what exactly is the site for.......
it is difficult to comment on when I dont know what the intention or intended audience of the site is.....
Not much else there to comment on, but it could do with a header, and a different background color.......