I think nobody has commented because we can't think of any suggestions. It's perfect.
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How do you intend to drive traffic to it? If you are hoping for SE traffic, you will have a lot of optimizing to do...I would suggest your keyphrase in the title and as h1 near the top of the page to start....
You might also want to take a look at the site in lynx or another text only browser - I'm not sure all of the links were working in text mode.