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05-24-2005, 10:26 AM #1Junior Guru Wannabe
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¡¾About My Diary¡¿Can you correct it for doing me a favor?
Here it is, my diary for corrected:
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¡¼Nothing was learnt by me¡½
I didn't learn anything except of English these days. It seems like sth. wrong with me.In fact, it isn't very good as well in learning English, for i read a lot but remembered a little.When i was going to write this diary, i didn't know even how to write it.I had so many words waiting to be written, but could hardly wrote a single word---- IN ENGLISH. I thought i need spend more time in learning English.I hope the day when i can write freely in English comes as soon as possible.
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Any reply would be appreciated.
I'm waiting and waiting until...My homepage:http://upwind.onlinehn.com/site/
I need your help on my English.
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05-24-2005, 10:47 AM #2Web Hosting Master
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Here goes...a bit confused about the intent but here is what I've divined:
I feel like I learned nothing
I've learned nothing but English lately. It seems like something is wrong with me. I'm not very good at learning English because I read a lot but remember very little. When I begain to write this diary, I didn't even know how to write it. I had many words I wanted to write but could barely write a single word in English. I need to spend more time learning English. I hope the day comes very soon when I can write freely in English.Rich
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05-24-2005, 11:38 AM #3Web Hosting Master
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Re: ¡¾About My Diary¡¿Can you correct it for doing me a favor?
Originally posted by FromChina
Here it is, my diary for corrected:
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¡¼Nothing was learnt by me¡½
I didn't learn anything except of English these days. It seems like sth. wrong with me.In fact, it isn't very good as well in learning English, for i read a lot but remembered a little.When i was going to write this diary, i didn't know even how to write it.I had so many words waiting to be written, but could hardly wrote a single word---- IN ENGLISH. I thought i need spend more time in learning English.I hope the day when i can write freely in English comes as soon as possible.
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Any reply would be appreciated.
I'm waiting and waiting until...
I'm not learning a thing!
I'm not really learning English these days. I think there may be something wrong with me. In fact, although I read a lot, I seem to remember very little. When I decided to write this diary I didn't even know how to write it. I had so many things to write about, but it was very difficult to write a word of it --- IN ENGLISH. I think I need to spend more time learning English. I'm looking forward to the day that I can write freely in English and I hope that day comes soon!
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05-24-2005, 11:54 AM #4Temporarily Suspended
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I'd say for someone who is just learning english you seem to be doing a pretty good job.
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05-24-2005, 12:39 PM #5Web Hosting Master
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Is this a 'diary' assignment for an english class you are taking?
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05-25-2005, 10:45 AM #6Junior Guru Wannabe
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Hi, firends above.
To DevilDog and Hiccups, I copied your corrections, and study them in home. Thank you very much.I really love your corrections, and read them time and time again.
To adam,i'm very glad to hear that . Thank you.
To amish_geek, No. It's a diary in my website.My homepage:http://upwind.onlinehn.com/site/
I need your help on my English.
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05-25-2005, 11:01 AM #7Web Hosting Master
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Just some general things.
You need a space after your commas, but not before.
Comma = ,
So, just like right there. So,(SPACE) rest of sentence.
Also, always have a space after your periods.
No: I went to the mall.The food was good.
Yes: I went to the mall. The food was good.
These corrections will make your writing look better.
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05-25-2005, 11:21 AM #8Junior Guru Wannabe
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Great! Thank you.
My homepage:http://upwind.onlinehn.com/site/
I need your help on my English.