Well http://www.eTriculate.com is a project I've been working on for almost two years now. Basically it allows users to sign up, set up their own personal "website", upload photos, maintain a journal, and more. All at no cost. To improve my explanation, it is basically a service like MySpace.com, except with a unique twist.
Now the website isn't entirely complete, but it is pretty much there and although we've invested some money advertising at certain places, we're not seeing the results I was hoping for.
So my question is, taken a look at http://www.eTriculate.com/ what does the website initially seem like when you arrive there? What could we change to improve the user's initial understanding of the website? Does the "Introduction" seem explanatory enough?