Well http://www.eTriculate.com is a project I've been working on for almost two years now. Basically it allows users to sign up, set up their own personal "website", upload photos, maintain a journal, and more. All at no cost. To improve my explanation, it is basically a service like MySpace.com, except with a unique twist.

Now the website isn't entirely complete, but it is pretty much there and although we've invested some money advertising at certain places, we're not seeing the results I was hoping for.

So my question is, taken a look at http://www.eTriculate.com/ what does the website initially seem like when you arrive there? What could we change to improve the user's initial understanding of the website? Does the "Introduction" seem explanatory enough?

Any input is greatly appreciated.