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  1. #1
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    Teh Hosting Kompeny

    I'm making a webhosting comic strip. Please review my first 2 episodes while a domain is picked out, and a website is created.


    http://goofyboots.info/thc/


    thanks

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    you know, that aint half bad....

    oh crap, here comes summer

    *puts on kiddiehost protection cloak*

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    i did a redraw on the first episode


    what's better: http://goofyboots.info/thc/1-rewrite.gif or http://goofyboots.info/thc/1.gif ?

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    Thats actually quite funny
    Hostime Managed Hosting
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    The little comic strips are okay nothing to die for. Also, I believe you are over exaggerating with the spelling. It makes it annoying to read, it's like i'm at a German Website. You can still put typo's in to make it funny, however, I feel your just going a little overboard.

    By the way, I would stick to this scheme:

    http://goofyboots.info/thc/1-second.gif

    Black/Grey/Black doesn't really go well.

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    would it be better if i took text from 1-rewrite.gif and applied it to 1-second.gif ?

    http://goofyboots.info/thc/1-third.gif

  7. #7
    Funny episodes. Think we got a bestseller

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    Its funny because its true in some cases.
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    I cleaned up the writing because some people didn't like it. It's now a little more AOLlistic.

    One idea i had was to make one of the kids really angry.

    Why?

    What bad hosting company doesn't have a support engineer with no patience?


    Because i find the idea of cursing children and kids who treat their own parents like crap hilarious, i give you episode number 2: Website Construction.

    Rewrite of the first episode - http://goofyboots.info/thc/maybefinal.gif

    I'm considering making it into a flash cartoon, but that's require someone to do voices. If you have a microphone, and can do some bad sounding voices, and you're willing to work for free send me a pm, or reply to this thread.

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    I can do some voice acting. Give me a script with a few attitudes and phrases and then you can pick which one I fit best.
    So far I have not needed to make 31 posts thanks to the search function.

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