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  1. #1

    * [critique] new layout preview :)

    How does this new layout preview look?


  2. #2
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Goleta, CA
    There's another forum for this somewhere and the mods can move it eventually. That said, it looks fine.
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  3. #3
    O, I am sorry, I didnt know where to post it, so put it in the general forum

    Thanks for that word pixel_fenix

  4. #4
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    Aug 2003
    I don't see why you have your name twice in the header? Maybe condense the header and move the 468x60 ad up a bit higher. This would allow more room for content on the index page and encourage viewing. - Shared and Reseller Hosting Solutions on cPanel/WHM Linux Servers - Discount ModernBill Licenses, Hosted Installations, and Professional Services
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  5. #5
    Join Date
    Aug 2003
    I would say the logo is good looking, but you shouldn't use the name twice in the header.

    Nice work
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    Co-Founder @ Neveli

  6. #6
    Join Date
    Dec 2003
    The design looks pretty good. My only suggestion would be to do something to the text ontop of the red tabs. It hurt my eyes to try to read it.
    Brandon Davis
    BD Design & Consulting of Austin - Website & Graphic Design, Hosting & More

  7. #7
    Ok, Thank you Brandon

    Any thing else I can improve?

  8. #8
    Join Date
    Jun 2003
    Yes, remove the second Jezzo you have there, it looks to me like you are mixing your styles up. The rest of the design is sleek [almost] but you have some grungy text for the second Jezzo.

    The text on the red bars; remove the outer glow as it only takes away from the design.

    Also, did you create the image for the header? If so good job!

  9. #9
    Thanks IDS, I am working on it now and looking to stir up a new preview
    Thanks a ton, anyone else? I appreciate it so much!

  10. #10
    Nice one.
    Also just to let you know that it is ADVERTISING, and not ADVERTIZING.
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  11. #11
    Join Date
    May 2004
    New Zealand
    thats pretty cool.

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