Although white space sells, I think there is perhaps a bit too much on your site, starts to look a little bland. I would also cut down on the varied use of fonts, you have different fonts for your buttons, slogan, body text and titles, which results in a lack of unity in my opinion. How about some photos to jazz it up a bit, add something unique?
I would recommend you use a GIF for your logo, and not a JPG as your losing a lot of definition around the text areas.
I did. I wasn't aware that punctuation following the URL would be incorporated, but I should have checked that.
Personally I think the amount of white space is decent. I hate cluttered websites, and I really don't think mine is too blank. However within the next couple of weeks a lot of white space will be disappearing to accomodate new things.
add something unique?
cut down on the varied use of fonts
I might agree there.
Any further criticisms are appreciated. Thanks guys.
Hit counter is working fine..
The site looks like it took 5 minutes to design.. no offense.
I suggest you hire a professional designer..
If your intention is to be more content than design... then its alright...
I'll see what I can work out. Just know that I'm not exactly a professional. I don't know a lot of HTML nor do I know Java. I use Macromedia Dreamweaver. However, I am a programmer and am experienced in C++ and BASIC, so I'm good at figuring out how the code for my site works.
ilyash, what would you recommend? I like the color scheme and layout of my site. What can I do to change it?
HI. I visited your site today and found it interesting. I enjoyed the material and felt like you have concentrated on delivering your message and content first. Thats is the correct ordering for development.
You need to continue developing your site and the "appeal" will continue to grow.
I suggest you link to the shop in a new browser window since there is no easy way to ge back to your home site.