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Thread: Bay Area Talk

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    * Bay Area Talk

    well , what you think ?

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    looks fine

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    I'm assuming you're talking about the San Francisco Bay Area? If so you may want to make that clear. hehe I recently moved out of the bay area to washington state.. I just hated that place.

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    I think the page looks a bit spread out. Not in any huge bad way though. Overall it looks good.
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    Seems good, a bit simple, but ok.

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    anything i should add ?

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    I agree you need a graphic somewhere at the top.

    these topics aren't aligned with the checkmarks like the rest.



    batalk ster

    humor

    love and relationships

    the topics should be capitalized

    I'd get the forum section shorter and the last post section wider.



    talk looks like tolh

    I like the blue in your site.

    black text is hard to see on a dark green background


    the user name and pw is in the perfect spot.

    Pete

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    ok will do , i just dont know what to do with the logo

    Originally posted by peteq
    I agree you need a graphic somewhere at the top.

    these topics aren't aligned with the checkmarks like the rest.



    batalk ster

    humor

    love and relationships

    the topics should be capitalized

    I'd get the forum section shorter and the last post section wider.



    talk looks like tolh

    I like the blue in your site.

    black text is hard to see on a dark green background


    the user name and pw is in the perfect spot.

    Pete

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    ok , i change the look

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    thanks and i did what you think is best .
    i to agree with you ..

    please check it out and let me know

    Originally posted by peteq
    I agree you need a graphic somewhere at the top.

    these topics aren't aligned with the checkmarks like the rest.



    batalk ster

    humor

    love and relationships

    the topics should be capitalized

    I'd get the forum section shorter and the last post section wider.



    talk looks like tolh

    I like the blue in your site.

    black text is hard to see on a dark green background


    the user name and pw is in the perfect spot.

    Pete

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    Site been updated and custom hacks ... please review

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    updated again

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    Looks good. I would suggest something in top right corner though...

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    Good topic and service for the Bay area, I love San Francisco . But I don't think you're putting your best face forward yet. Here are a couple of suggestions to get started.

    1. The header message seems to be communicating you are a site focused on gaming or grunge. It also seems to be speaking to a younger audience. The header could be clearer by moving the text to the right side of the header which would balance out the page too. Or you could flip the graphic so it comes in on the right side of the header too.

    2. Moving down the page the headers main color is black but this isn't carried throught to any other parts of the theme. So there is inconsistency in the theme's look/feel. Leading to a disjointed feeling.

    3. There is also no visual hierarchy on the page, the header text is the same size of all the rest of the text on the page. I suggest increasing the text size for all headers and possibly captilizing all the letters.

    4. The content/message - the page background could be used more effectively to define the page. For example, everything is gray now but you could use color to define and break up the space. White could be used to define the content/message area which would give definition to your left side bar navigation/message area.

    I hope this helps and good luck on your site.

    All the best,

    Vanessa

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