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[Carp]

Hey, I am starting a service soon. I hope to open on January 1st. I will be offering voicemail boxes, dedicated voicemail servers, and I will also be building phone systems for companies. I am working on my webpage and I want to see of you guys have any input for me. I cant think of much more to put on here so some idea's would be great also. Tthanks alot. Here is what I have:

Welcome to Northern New York Voice Services. NNYVS is a new business firm located in Moriah, NY. We are offering a variety of services from a single voicemail box to a dedicated voicemail server, from a single extension phone system to a multiple location business phone system. You can find out more about what we offer by clicking the 'Services' link on the left.

Here at NNYVS, we strive to satisfy our customers. Your needs are our #1 priority. Whether you're looking for just a voicemail box or a professional service, we try to get all your questions answered as soon as we can. We look forward to working with anyone or any business.

Contact us today at 1-800-766-6707 (ext. 0) or email us at mail@nyvs.com for more details.

I'm not sure if I can put this here, but I will be hosting dedicated voicemail servers. Sorry if this doesn't belong here. Thanks alot.

[anon-e-mouse]

Moved to Other Reviews.

[Carp]

Does anyone have anything? I really am having a brain blurb. Thanks.

[Eric West]

Well...you may want to rewrite your paragraph to sound more professional

Other than that, how much do you plan on charging for a voice mail box? How much space?

Have you thought about the growing number of people using cellphones that come with voice mail?

Have you thought about making your service free and making money from short advertisements that the people have to listen to before they get to use/access their box?

If you would like some more pointers, hit me up on AIM. my screen name is GotBinary, I'd be happy to help.

[Carp]

Yes, i have thought of that. I still may offer the voice mail box free and just charge for my other services. Will I make any profit really from ads? What is wrong with my paragraph? Do you think dedicated voicemail servers are a good idea? I am going to talk to you on AIM when you get on. Thanks.