It's a very good layout, it's impressive that it's your first.
I'll try suggestions:
You could get some new fonts, for menus and texts.
Contrast more the colors (it's a bit too dark and red)
Explore more the photoshop(?) gradients, styles at the areas.
Use some non-smoothed text, and play with bold and different colors while editing the text.
It's shifted too far to the right. Looks bad in Google Chromium. Too much empty space on the left side. That stock photo of the girl is used in 100's of hosting sites.
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Good layout but i think the red is a little too much. A site like Netflix gets away with it, but I would try a subtler color for your design. If you notice, a lot of e-commerce sites utilize a lot of white space and let the products themselves make up for a lack of color in the design.
For your first time, this is outstanding. I'd probably lighten up the background to have some contrast, but other than that, it's great.
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