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    :: Design Review please...

    Hey, people

    I have been hammered with work and this is the first time in a long time I have had the opportunity to post up for a review.

    Let me know what you think, opinions ect. The "GO" area under Unix plans is a concept there. Might just make the entire box a link and make it cleaner looking.

    Thanks people.
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    Sweet! Really love it.

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    opps, just noticed the spelling error.....duh

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    looks awesome! may i ask what font is that you've used there on the menu?

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    Thanks,

    Font used is BankGothic MD Bt

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    Thats really simple but yet very nice. Good job!

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    like your site good work.

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    Looks good, nice and clean. I admire the simplicity. Can't be a 100% sure until it's filled, but I like the "GO".

    I like the way the image is used, but the girl seems to be frowning and worried instead of being excited and optimistic about her future.

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    The text with the picture does not fit in well. maybe its the font. maybe its the text color. maybe some shapes are missing with it. something is wrong in there

    apart from that , it can pass for a semi professional work
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    Pic was just a filler. Mahalo Puna

    what is the criteria for professional work?

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    I aggree - you got an awful lot of white space -- the image of the woman looks good -- maybe stick some kind of border around there or some more filler in the white.

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    That choice of a pic was a filler. The idea of the white space is to show simplicity and cleaness.

    The added white space allows for the information and content delivery to be compartmentalized on the home page.

    On internal pages there would be a border of white space that one again shows a clean look as well as assists in placing content into compartments, this allows for better user comprehension and retention.

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    Hey, it's pretty good, I like it. No complaints from me!

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    Tranz, nice work man =)

    That picture is perfect =), nice clean photoshop layout picture.
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    layout looks nice.

    a side note though, it may just be me, but StorHost really doesnt work well IMO. Storehost, yes. StarHost, yes. But StorHost just has that little something wrong that i cant put my finger on. And remember, first impressions are everything.
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    Originally posted by Tranz
    Pic was just a filler. Mahalo Puna

    what is the criteria for professional work?
    professional work means taking care of anything required.

    now you see you have that quote in there. there is some problem with it and u can deal iwth it in 2 ways In my opinion

    1) Put the source of that text quote (in small font size below it maybe) , so let people know where it comes from/who says it

    2) Maybe change the font color if u dont wanna put the source..

    thats all.. apart from that its good as i said earlier

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    Thanks for the kind words guys. Will post it back up when it is fully fleshed outwith content and inner pages.

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