I put my site up for review here and asked for people's opinions. My first site looked pretty decent and it got a lot of bad reviews; they were right. I had lots of traffic going to the site and barely any sales out of it.

I got a new site up now but some people are saying it's still not perfect but it's an improvement. Now, my question to you guys is what content should a GSP have and how should everything be laid out content wise?

I also have a 7 day money back guarantee that I believe will be a big plus, but not sure where that should be marketed to get maximum exposior.

I'm using modernbill and TCAdmin for software. This leads me to my next question, should I have a demo of the software I use? And should I link my demo to TCAdmin's demo or should I put one up of my own? I ask that because some people tend to mess around with the demos and TCadmin's demo has it so they can't mess around with it. Same thing but for cPanel.

Thank you.

I like it as it is, and I think your content is fine. Although that's my opinion - and I'm a guy who like clean pages without 20MB slow loading graphics. :)
Good luck with the new page.