Allright now for the final reviews. http://www.stratius.com/demi/new-stuff/ is very close to being compleated. I would like for anyone and everyone to go through everything (content, design, everything). and tell me what they think. Also I would like to know of anything that dosent show up quite right, or if you find any errors. I would like to know if everything shows up right in *nix, mac, windows, and any other os that someone out there might have. any critisim is also very welcome.

You are ready to rock and roll!! I havent read the content, but the layout looks good!!
The human click thing looks a lil lost in the entire page, ummmm put it somewhere else, duno where though :)

Yep, rock-n-roll time. Well done!

I have to agree with Kunal about the HumanClick thing. Maybe put it on the left side instead or, add some more descriptive text on the front page (maybe a teaser on plans) and then wrap text next to the HC thing. I think you need to probably use up some of the space anyway.

Things I like:

1. The Calculator Script (very nice)

2. The Site Map (always a good idea)

Things I didn't like:

1. Content Layout (looks very *cheap* - better get opinions of some *professional* web designers you know)

2. Content Language (not written for positive subliminal impact)

OVERALL COMMENT - your website is not designed to be a boon to you in your business... it actually will be a liability. Mark my words.

I truly hope I am proved wrong, Stratius... because, personally, I wish you the best of luck. Do use this design for a couple of months. Re-evaluate it on the business it gets you... and get back to me after that.

I would be truly happy to learn I have been proved wrong.

No offense meant at all with this post. I just posted because you requested criticism. Only there isn't enough time and space to criticize the many features which your site lacks and should have.

But I will admit this... compared to many other sites I have seen, your website does seem to be *neat* in appearance. Who is designing this site for you? Seems he or she is very lacking in graphic design skills :(

By the way, I am using the IE 5.0 browser right now and notice that your ellipse graphic appears *dirty*... i think i remember seeing it *clean* the first time.

I think the other professionals in this forum are more qualified than me to comment on the graphic design angle... I am just the pied piper of marketing !!!!! Ya' know... *after I play the musical pipe*... clients begin to appear from everywhere and follow you all the way right up to our server :D

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Things I like:

1. The Calculator Script (very nice)

2. The Site Map (always a good idea)

Things I didn't like:

1. Content Layout (looks very *cheap* - better get opinions of some *professional* web designers you know)

2. Content Language (not written for positive subliminal impact)

OVERALL COMMENT - your website is not designed to be a boon to you in your business... it actually will be a liability. Mark my words.

I truly hope I am proved wrong, Stratius... because, personally, I wish you the best of luck. Do use this design for a couple of months. Re-evaluate it on the business it gets you... and get back to me after that.

I would be truly happy to learn I have been proved wrong.

No offense meant at all with this post. I just posted because you requested criticism. Only there isn't enough time and space to criticize the many features which your site lacks and should have.

But I will admit this... compared to many other sites I have seen, your website does seem to be *neat* in appearance. Who is designing this site for you? Seems he or she is very lacking in graphic design skills :(

By the way, I am using the IE 5.0 browser right now and notice that your ellipse graphic appears *dirty*... I think I remember seeing it *clean* the first time.

I think the other web design professionals in this forum are more qualified than me to comment on the graphic design angle... I am just the good ol' pied piper of marketing !!!!! Ya' know... after I play the musical pipe... clients just begin to appear from everywhere and follow you all the way right up to our server :D

Learner