In another post a while back I made mention of the fact that I am dyslexic..I could use a hand with proofreading one page (my index) if youd like to help me (pleeessse) drop me an email:)

Thanks

I quickly glanced at your opening page.

One suggestion would to make all of the text fit within the background image so that the text doesn't overrun it, as it gets hard to read.

"Greetings! I am Dana your Hostess. Many of you Will know me from my two years operating
w-i-c-c-a-n.org. AKindOfMagick.Com is going to take the best part's of w-i-c-c-a-n.org and incorperate
them while casting aside all of the baggage ,this site is going to be a collection of thoughts from
the Magickal to the Mundane! "

(whoops out kdictionary)

A few grammar errors. "Many of you Will". Will should not be capitalized. Also, "aside all of the baggage ,this site" the comma should be after baggage and before the space. "and incorperate them" should be "incorporate". Finally, I don't believe you need to use the apostrophe on "to take the best part's of". I believe just using "parts" would do. Hope this helps you out. :)

(edit)Also, "Well here we are on our new host if you've been having trouble accessing the site its because we were
in the process of moving to a different hosting company. " The "its" should be "it's". Another way to rewrite it would be "Well, here we are on our new host. If you have been having trouble accessing the site it is because we were in the process of moving to a different hosting company." Hope this helps you more. :)
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[Edited by Vincent Paglione on 09-11-2000 at 10:43 PM]

thats my personal site....I was looking for someone to proof read my new hosting site LOL *G*

and whats the link to that site??? :)

Originally posted by kunal
and whats the link to that site??? :)

Want to post it in the open forum (its not ready for primetime yet)...thats why I asked people interested in helping to email me:)

Sorry Dana, hehe. I took the site out of your signature. Well, I hope that helps you out anyway. :)

Your hosting company site looks ok to me lol ..... not hard to guess the website addie when ya gave the name out before :-).

Originally posted by Technics
Your hosting company site looks ok to me lol ..... not hard to guess the website addie when ya gave the name out before :-).

shhhhhhhhhh dont give way da secret :P**********

I know my spelling is off and the grammer could use some work I have a really bad case of net slang..and have to fight the smiley face demon!! :):):) *G*

secret is safe with me :-).

like the htaccess now i cant see ur site "sigh" lol-

[Edited by Technics on 09-12-2000 at 04:12 PM]

Originally posted by Technics
secret is safe with me :-).

like the htaccess now i cant see ur site "sigh" lol-

[Edited by Technics on 09-12-2000 at 04:12 PM]

hehehehehehehe *G* I dont want the world going there till my NS is set up:)

YIPPI!! YIPPI!!! I found out the name!! YIPPI!!


And guess what I am tempted to do?? Post it here?? Can I?? pls?? Can I?? ;)

Ummmm, is it the same one that is in her sig? Heh heh... :)

its http://www.veracityhosting.com (Password Protected if ya want to see it ya gotta email me :P***********)

And if all you Guru's do a Who is on it and see a name other than Dana its my legal name Dana is my on and off line Nick